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December Story Contest

Amy chapter 2 read part one here

by Breanna55555 & Annie     age  10

 

Prologue:
“What is it?” I asked in a whisper trying not to wake Michel or Star Racer. She touched Me with her muzzle and then I heard some thing in my head: “ I would like you to enter this shhhhh, follow me.” I did follow her we stopped at a distance with Michel not able to hear us.

 

The she said, “Mount up and hang on!” I did mount then I twisted my fingers in her mane then she reared and we galloped off. Then we stopped and she talked with me mind to mind,“Okay, I wanted to do some thing so first dismount.” I did and stepped back, then she spread wings. “Wow!” I said aloud. Then she said,“I wanted to take you on your first flight.” Then she put her head in between my legs and then put up her head and I slid onto her back.

 

Chapter 2

 

THE WORST DAY EVER

 

It was turning out to be the worst day ever.

 

I looked at Michel. He was scared so was I. I stared reading the note Again, “Okay, there are two saddles in the saddle bags, One in each.” We looked in the saddle bags and there were two tiny Little saddles. Along with two tiny Bridles to match. We looked At each other and didn’t know what to say. The saddles were a as Big as a paperclip!

 

Then we picked them up and suddenly They became heavy, and grew! They now were the size of A regular saddle! The Bridles grew as well. The saddle was A slick midnight black and the saddle blanket was Turquoise.  The Bridle matched the saddle but had little Turquoise beads in them. “Whoa!” I exclaimed. The saddles were getting heavy for us, so we put them on the saddle rack by the paddock. We gently laid the Bridles on the saddles. We ran to the table. I started reading the note, “Good you now have seen magic! Well a little of it. Any ways there are clothes in the packs that are small but grow like the saddles. There are also food and supplies for your long journey. There are also food for the ponies.”

We both looked at each other with the same look on our faces that Said, Long journey? “What does is mean Long Journey?” Michel Asked me.

 

“DON’T ASK ME!” I sort of screamed.

 

“Keep it down!Were sleeping!” We suddenly heard out of the paddock. We suddenly Looked up at each other with WIDE eyes. “Who’s th-there?” I stammered.


“Me! Cloud Jumper! Who else Not Star Racer, not Michel, not you of course! But me Cloud Jumper!” We heard from the paddock again.


We looked at the ponies Star racer Put up his head and said:
“Oh just read the note!” I shoved my hands on the note and read,By the way the ponies can talk. But they aren’t ponies their Unicorns.”


I starred at the note. “Now you know. FINALLY!” We heard from Cloud Jumper. I read the last words of the note, Do what the unicorns say. They will help you. Granny

 

“That’s it?” Michel asked me.

“Yes.” I said.

 

“Now listen up! Oh Racer Wake up!” Cloud Jumper said.

 

“What is it Cloud?”Star racer said.

 

“They know! Oh and call me Cloud and call Him Racer.” Cloud said.

 

“Um, OK.” Michel Stammered.

 

“Oh if they know then Tell then what to do!” Racer said to Cloud.

 

“First, you know those necklaces? Put them on and come to us and say, Oka Shakale make it thy unicorns! Then Put a tear on us after that. No questions just do it. NOW!”

 

Cloud commanded to us. We ran to them and said,

 

“Oka Shakale make it thy unicorns!” We couldn’t put a tear
On them so we just hoped some thing would happen. Then Cloud rolled her Eyes and And so did Racer then they picked up there hooves and stomped On our feet!

 

“YOW!” I yelled.

 

A single tear rolled down my cheek and fell On Cloud. A bright light appeared and then Cloud was a pearly white Unicorn! I was stunned. Then Raced stomped on Michel’s foot. He yelped And a tear rolled on to Racer and he turned into a midnight black unicorn!

 

“Good, Now go saddle us!” Racer commanded. We tacked them up as fast as possible.

 

“Done” I said. Cloud then faded and reappeared! She then said, The coast is clear! Lead us out and mount us! We will do the rest.  But Don’t forget the packs and saddle bags!” We hitched the saddle bag on And put the packs on. Then we lead the ponies out mounted and then they Put down there heads and a light blinded us. We weren’t in the forest.


"Michel I don’t think were in the forest any more.” I said while looking around. Were the ponies were standing there was beautiful green grass. In the distance was A forest, a waterfall, and a beach. It was amazing. Over head was a Dragon it roared and flew away. We were awestruck. Then the unicorns looked up And cantered a beautiful canter. There strides were long but yet smooth On the road. We felt like we were flying! We jumped streams and Flew over bushes. Then there was a Gigantic CLIFF ahead! I shut my eyes thinking I was going to die when we jumped I looked Down to the sharp rocks below and we actually were flying! I looked beside me were wings were! Beautiful sparkly white wings were! We flew over the cliff and we landed smoothly.

 

After we landed the wings disappeared And we raced deep into the forest I saw before we were off. After hours of riding We stopped at a small clearing deep in the forest. Michel and I dismounted and landed on the Ground with a thud.

 

“Why here?” I asked Cloud.

 

“It is safe here.” Racer answered. 

 

“Racer will You do the magic?” Cloud asked.

 

“Yes.” Racer answered. Racer put his head down and his Horn touched the ground a flash of light and then there was a fire with no smoke! Wow I thought.

 

“Okay, there’s a fire so now you can cook something to eat.” Cloud told us. Michel took care of the ponies as I did dinner. The Unicorns Were grazing and keeping watch (For something). I had come back with firewood while Michel
Put the food on a plate and got some water for us and Cloud, Racer. We sat on two stumps and ate. We then slept. That night some thing happened. I woke some time to Cloud Jumper nudging me.

 

“What is it?” I asked in a whisper trying not to wake Michel or Star Racer. She touched Me with her muzzle and then I heard some thing in my head:“Shhhh, follow me.” I did follow her we stopped at a distance with Michel not able to hear us. The she said, “Mount up and hang on!”

 

I did mount then I twisted my fingers in her mane then she reared and we galloped off. Then we stopped and she talked with me mind to mind,“Okay, I wanted to do some thing so first dismount.” I did and stepped back, then she spread wings. “Wow!” I said aloud. Then she said, “I wanted to take you on your first flight.” Then she put her head in between my legs and then put up her head and I slid onto her back  My eyes went wide so wide they should have blown up like a balloon!


Then she reared up and galloped then she spread her wings and Jumped! Instead of landing hard on the ground we were airborne. We soared above The forest and looking down made me feel alive. Then there was a cloud In front of us, then she flew to were her feet touched the cloud! Her name was perfect she was a CLOUD JUMPER. And here was I Riding her while she cloud jumps! After we saw the sun start to break the horizon We headed back. Then I noticed that Star Racer and Michel weren’t there. Then Star Racer came out of the sky carrying Michel and something else. After they landed Michel got off and then Michel said “We got you two these.”  Then he handed me a star. And Star Racer had a Star with him too the star was floating Next to him. Then he push the star to Cloud jumper with his wing. Then she lifted her hoof and the star floated on to her hoof, then it turned in a golden horse shoe. Then all the hooves Wore golden horse shoe’s.

 

“Wow thanks Racer.” Cloud said. “No problem. We were just racing some stars.” Answered Racer. Then Michel’s
Star floated on to my wrist. Then it turned into a golden Bracelet.

 

“Thanks Michel.”

 

“No problem. Plus you’re my best friend.” He said to me.

 

“Ok you two. Go fix your selves breakfast while we start a fire to cook on.” Cloud said. To us. Michel and I got on some new close by trying out a new spell Which Star racer showed us. After we had breakfast we saddled the unicorns And were off. “Were are we going anyways?” I asked mind to mind.

 

“The Unicorns castle. There you two will be safe.” She answered.

 

“Safe? Safe from what?” I asked again.

 

“From. From. Um… from the warlock.”

 

“A WHAT?” I asked again. 

 

“A warlock is a very evil wizard. Well here it is.” She answered Then they spread there wings and we flew high above every thing.


Then beside Star racer Stars lined up and then they raced along.


Cloud Jumper started cloud jumping again. Then we came
To a storm cloud and Cloud Jumper when straight through it! After we came Out I was wet. I felt soggy all over. Then Michel and Star Racer flew beside Us and the laughed at us. They weren’t watching where there were going and flew
Into a water fall and they got even more wet! I giggled and then he said,“Ha ha very funny.” He rolled his eyes at me while he said that.


“Hmm,  Haven’t you said that when we were mortal!” I said sarcastically.


“Good you know you aren’t mortal!” Exclaimed Cloud Jumper.

 

“What it was just a joke I didn’t actually think we were not mortal.” I said while widening my eyes.


It was hours of flying then I spotted some thing in the distance. We came closer and I saw that it was a castle I thought. The castle was Black and shimmering it looked like a one of those creepy haunted castle people make
Up ghost stories about.

 

“What’s that?” I asked mind to mind.

 

“That’s a warlocks castle.” She answered. I shivered. It was now getting late and the castle was far beyond the horizon. We stopped and settled down for the night.

 

After every thing was settled Cloud jumper spoke to Star Racer,  “Psst! Racer! I think he is looking for us!” Cloud said to him.


“What?! How do know?” He asked with a frightened face.

 

“I knew because there wasn’t a Black unicorn there!” She exclaimed.

 

“Wait I forgot what kind of unicorn again?”

 

He asked. “He has a fast flying black unicorn.” She answered.

 

After they stopped talking they told what was happening.

 

“Why do we have to worry what does he have against us?”
Michel asked.

 

“Well…” Cloud started. “I should tell you the story about what happened years ago, Then she started the story:


“Long ago, before we all were born the Unicorns were powerful and graces. A young man wanted magic but he could not have because he was just a Mortal. Then there was legend about a few men and women who gained trust of the unicorns So the unicorns gave them magic. They called them Wizards and Witches. Then the man heard that all unicorns magic come from the horn. So he set out and when he tried to kill the unicorn his arrow broke into a million pieces and the unicorn ran away. Then thought he needed something heavy. He had heard a unicorn was hurt and was healing at the stables there was A witch there who was healing the unicorn. Then he went to see the unicorn and study it.
When he saw it he recognized it as the unicorn in the woods he tried to kill. Then a question Came to his mind, How did the animal get hurt? He then asked the healer and she said That the unicorn was running when a man was about to strike a tree with his golden sword
When she came rushing past and when she did he tried to strike the tree he accidentally Struck Star of The Night. Then the man knew what he had to do. Later that day that He had the sword maker make him a sword of gold then he went out and killed a unicorn When he took off his horn he became a warlock. Many years later two children were born of the unicorns and they were the leaders of unicorns. So a warlock thought that tons of magic he would own if he killed the two.”

 

Cloud Jumper stopped. I was frightened. “Ok now we know.”
I said doubtfully.

 

“Ok you two go to bed.” Star Racer said. We all went to bed and then We heard some thing behind us, We heard: “RUN WHILE YOU CAN I WILL FIND YOU! HA HA HA HA HA!” 

 
Then the unicorns put there wings behind them and we were went so Fast that our helmets went behind us and flew away! We kept going and in an hour We reached the castle. Or at least half way to it. We were almost there!


We settled down for the night. Again. Yes I know it is getting boring But now the story gets shaken up! Then after we settled down my eyes Turned white I saw some thing it wasn’t clear but I still saw, A man dressed in black riding bare back on a black unicorn with red eyes and his mane and tail were on fire, and his hooves looked like lava behind him was a boy tied up and he couldn’t see a thing because  he was blind folded. His ankles and wrists were tied. Then the man stopped at a water fall and then he took of the boy’s mouth tie. The boys mouth also was tied. Then the man Took him off of the animal and shook him. Then the man said, “Where are they?! WHERE?!!”


Then the boy said, “I’ll never tell not in my life!”

 

The man was now so angry his head was so red! Then the man said, “FINE! Then watch your precious  little unicorn die! HA!”


At that moment he held out a young unicorn over the water fall and started pulling out his fingers!

 

“There going to castle!” The boy screamed. Then the man shut his eyes and the young unicorn spread some wings and flew out of his arms. Then the man let go of the boy over the water fall! “AHH!” The boy screamed as he fell. 

 

Then the unicorn dove for the boy And caught him they flew as fast as ever away.  Then the man looked to the sky and said, “I WILL FIND YOU AMY!” Then it all flashed away. I woke up lying down in the woods with a camp fire beside me.  I sat up my head ached.

 

“Ow!” I exclaimed while putting my hand on my head. 

 

“Easy does it.” Michel said to me.  He then gave me a wet wash cloth.

 

“Thanks” I said “What happened?” He asked me.

 

“I actually don’t know.” I answered insecurely.


“You had a vision on what happened. A event that you need to know of.” Star Racer said.


“That was scary.” I said.

 

“Ok enough! Bed please.” Cloud Jumper said.

 

After that we went to bed. I woke up and used the new clothes spell. I saddled up with Michel and we rode off into the sky. Then we all heard something beating behind us. I looked and there gaining on us was, the Warlock I saw in my vision and his unicorn. “I KNEW I WOULD FIND YOU! HA HA!”
The Warlock said. Then a beam of red light cast out onto us and couldn’t escape. He had us in his grasp. We turned into a cave and he put us in before him making us unable to get out. We were now cornered. By the warlock. He then stepped towards Star Racer.


Star Racer let out a warning whinny and almost charged when the warlocks Unicorn snarled and Bared his teeth. Star Racer put his head down and stepped back. “Ah don’t even try! Merman will never let you pass or hurt me.” The warlock said.

 

“Um Merman?” I said while trying to hold back a loud giggle.

 

“Oh Shut Up!  Yes it’s a Unicorn named Merman! That’s the last time I trust a mermaid from naming a animal.” He said while frowning.

 

“Don’t even try to Hurt these two!” Yelled Cloud Jumper.

 

“Oh I don’t expect on hurting my Child!” The Warlock said to me.

 

“WHAT WARLOCK?!” I asked a bit with a yell.

 

“Oh don’t call me Warlock. Call me daddy. He said while smiling. You see if she accepts me as her father then I Become powerful!” Exclaimed the Warlock.

 

“Ok then how are you my father? I know that those aren’t my real parent’s because I am adopted.” I said while cocking my head.


“I knew you would ask that.” The Warlock said.  “It’s a long story go ahead get Comfy.” He said while snapping his fingers and a chair appeared. I looked to Cloud Jumper as if it was safe to sit in. She nodded and I sat down.  

 

“First you were left at the orphanage by your grandmother.  She made sure that the two who adopted you knew what you REALLY were. She made sure that she kept contact and
saw you very often. Oh and your last name Mustang is your last name.” He said.


Star Racer was uncomfortable. And he kept fidgeting. I knew he wanted to leave NOW. So did I. My dad then made me come to him and he introduced me to Merman. He Told me that I could change his name if I wanted. I touched his mane and his eyes Became brown instead of red and his hooves turned to a shiny black. He was now like A normal Black unicorn.

 

“What just happened?” I asked the warlock.

 

The warlock then Touched the animal again and it turned into what it was before I touched it. I ran back to my chair and sat down.

 

“Ok I believe you. You are my father!” I exclaimed. 

 

“I knew you would believe me.” He said. He knelt down on his knee And held out his arms for me to run to him. I wanted to run to him.  Both Star Racer and Cloud Jumper put on a disgusted face with betrayal in there eyes. I didn’t run I was torn. In between two half’s of my heart. I could join my father and get a new Unicorn. Or I could save many life’s by choosing friends. I had no idea what to do.


Then Michel spoke, “Let’s let her choose!”.

 

“Fine! Any thing to get back my daughter!” My dad called out.

 

The two unicorns went to the back of the cave while My father’s went out flying waiting for the move. The chair disappeared.

“Ok, the rules are: If you take one step forward then the other person wins. And NO using Magic.” I called out while looking at each other. 


 Author note: I am not going to be writing more of this until you all caught up with me. Which will be in a while. I have past the 50 limit. Don't worry about it. I hope you like it. When this story is finished I will write a different one book. So and so forth. Enjoy!