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Last Hope

 

By intensity

Age 11

 

ÒYes.Ó

 

ÒYay!  ThatÕs awesome, Dez!  IÕm sure youÕll do well with her.  SheÕs in DeviÕs old stall.Ó Raved Ashley. ÒYeahÉ..Ó I replied, though very unconvincingly.  I knew Ashley noticed the waver to my voice, but even so she didnÕt let on. 

            

She smiled and walked out of the office, beckoning me to follow. 

 ÒSo, for now her tack is on my hook.  You can use your saddle on her; I rode her with it a few days ago."

 

The first thing Dez noticed was her martingale.  Dez, not usually a fan of high tempered horses, felt a few butterflies arise in her stomach. 

 

 ÒDoesÉ does sheÉreally need a martingale?Ó asked Dez, stomach still churning.

 

 ÒHuh?  Oh, Hope?  No, not really, but it seems to help with her outline, and you can never be too careful with a new horse.Ó   ÒOhÉok.Ó DezÕs nerves were subdued.

 

 ÒSo, letÕs go see your steed!Ó  Ashley nearly exploded with excitement. Dez, with less enthusiasm than Ashley by a long shot, followed her out of the office, down the school horse aisle, and into the courtyard.  The courtyard is a gorgeous well-kept yard with 10 stalls surrounding it.  All of the stalls were occupied with the best horses at SPRA.

 

Funny, I wonder why sheÕs keeping Hope out here.  I seriously doubt sheÕs one of the best horses.   Eventually Ashley stopped outside the stall.

 

ÒDez, meet Hope!Ó  Ashley said, nearly bursting at the seams with excitement.  The head that came up wasnÕt extraordinary, but wasnÕt the ugliest thing Dez had ever seen.  Her painted coat was dirty, yes, but nothing that a good groom wouldnÕt fix.  Her ears we delicate and soft, and the longer Dez looked at her the more beautiful Hope seemed to get.

 

 ÒWow, sheÕs gorgeous!Ó  Dez, not quite sure whether to thank Ashley or to hug her very very very tightly.

ÒI knew youÕd love her!Ó  Ashley was now jumping up and down, looking very strange for a 20 year old.

ÒSheÕs awesome!  Can I ride her in my group lesson today?Ó  Dez was feeling more and more positive by the second, and was almost to the point of attacking Ashley with grateful hugs.

 

ÒYes, definitely!  Try to stay away from the others; she may react poorly to other horses.  DonÕt worry, though, IÕm pretty sure sheÕll be fine.Ó  Thankfully Ashley had calmed down and was acting her age.  ÒBetter start getting ready!Ó

ÒHey, girly.  IÕm just going to put on this halter and we can head down to the cross ties.  Sound good?Ó  DezÕs voice was soothing, and HopeÕs ears began to droop.

 

They clip-clopped down the aisle and easily stopped for the cross ties. 

ÒAlright Hope, IÕm just going to go get my grooming kit and saddle, and then weÕll have an awesome ride.  DonÕt do anything while IÕm gone!Ó

 

Dez walked to the tack room, and breathed in the amazing aroma of leather and horses. The tack room was gorgeous, and every time Dez walked into it, she thought of how lucky she was to be able to ride at such an intense barn. She headed to her trunk, which was smaller and had much less grandeur by far in comparison to the others. 

Opening her trunk, she heaved out her grooming kit, and usual lime green saddle pad.

 

She grabbed her saddle off the rack and headed back down the aisle. 

ÒOk, sweety, letÕs get you clean and ready to go.Ó

 

20 minutes later, an anxious but excited horse and rider walked out to the dusty arena, where DezÕs lesson mates were already warming up.  

DezÕs best friend, Tina, trotted up and halted next to the mounting block where Ashley was bringing down her stirrups and tightening her girth. 

 

ÒHey, whoÕs this?Ó  Tina inquired.  TinaÕs horse, Smoky, a giant dapple grey Irish Warmblood, Smokey was the definition of a gentle giant. 

ÒThis is Last Hope.  AshleyÕs letting me ride her for now.  I donÕt know when IÕll have to stop; weÕre hoping this will work out so I wonÕt have to stop.  You like?Ó 

ÒYeah!  SheÕs so pretty!  I really hope you two have an awesome lesson.  Now, itÕs time for you to warm up.Ó  Tina smiled and trotted away.

 

ÒTinaÕs right, Hope.  Time to go.Ó  Dez murmured.

 

Dez took a deep breath, and got on.