July 2009 Story Contest

Queen of Horses by Breanna55555 & Annie age 10

Once upon a time there lived a unicorn, WHOA WHOA WHOA HOLD UP THE STORY! Lets start a little different please.

My name is Amy and this starts not on earth but Aremana.....

I was born in a deal to horses, the horses were upset that the unicorns were so powerful. I would be sent to earth to

be queen of horses. If I was they could have a little magic, so it was a deal! It all started when I was five,

"MOM!" I neighed. She answered with a contended whinny. She galloped to me. "What is it?!" She asked frightendly. "There’s some thing in the woods." I nickered softly and gestured toward the forest. She went wide eyed! And she neighed a loud frightened neigh for the

Unicorn herd leader to come. He galloped to us with a few other stallions. He reared and yelled to move. We galloped to the side in-between two others. The stallion kicked a HUGE bush it fell and he settled then a Creature jumped out and circled us then stopped. We all faced it was a horse! Some sort of a mythical creature I heard of that lived on a place called earth. I could tell that it was a female Mustang.

It was a lovely light bay. "I have come for the Unicorn known as Amy. Where is she?" The horse asked "I am Traia." I put my head down and sniffed her she was for sure from earth! "This is Amy!" The stallion said while nudging me with his muzzle. I stepped forward shaking.

The horse bowed its head and then said, "SHOW HER!" My mom stepped up and touched horns a flash happened and then I knew I must leave.

"Come." The horse told me I turned and nickered a good bye and I left my only home. We then went to earth some how. I don't know how I just know because the leaves were green, not Turquoise, The water was misty and crystal blue, and a Hawk roamed the sky instead of a dragon.

Horses were waiting with a spot in the middle. We walked on to pink flowers and Traia said as we stepped up: "I HAVE RETURNED FROM A LAND OF UNICORNS! I HAVE SUCEEDED! AND BROUGHT BACK A UNICORN! I BROUGHT AMY!" All the horses reared and neighed so loud. For sure they were happy.

Then two horses stepped up and placed a crown with jewels on them and a unicorn horn carved in it. I put down my head and they placed it on.

Then Traia spread her wings! She flew! A gun then sounded and she was amazing! The gun meant that a unicorn was in the thrown and queen!

10 years later..

I was now fifteen! I was old and tired. The horses were so powerful that some got a few horns and became unicorns. Which mad the horses more powerful. I thought about leaving to my REAL home but thought against it. I was grazing in the field when a bear came out! He snarled and roared! I knew he was hungry and I was on the on the menu. I stamped. Then remembered! The other animals wanted magic! He wasn't hungry just fighting for my horn! Then I remembered a horn only comes off by KILLING the unicorn! He was so big! The horses were far away to help me.

He charged and I put down my horn he was so scared he stopped and stepped back. Then he was more angry! Because the horses could do magic and the unicorn was winning by scaring him! I know what to do he charged and I reared and almost struck him then he yelped and ran away.

I was so tried. I wanted to leave, But when I tried the horses held me prisoner. I was hungry there was no food around. I then gave a deal to the horses, I said: "Let me! I will give one horse the gift of a unicorn, which is to become a unicorn. Then they can be queen and I can leave to home." They agreed and Traia was now a unicorn and I went home. They crowned me princess my mom had become queen and the next day I would be queen. NOT AGAIN!

THE END!