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August Story Contest

Bella and Her Secret: Part One
By: Seina
Age: 11

One day a girl named Bella was on a camping trip. She was having a great time being with here friends. But that would not last long. One day she heard a whining sound close by. She went outside over her tent to see a beautiful white mare. When the mare saw Bella she knew her. Bella on the other hand had no idea who she was. Bella put out her had to pet her mane.
”Bella I have finally found you,” said the mare. Bella fell back.
“You can talk?” The mare nodded her head.
“I have searched all around the world for you.” That was when Bella finally saw that the horse had wings. “what’s your name and how do you know mine?,” said Bella.
“My name is Snowball. I know you because your mother and father are the leaders of the magical land where I came from. But they are getting ill. We need you to take over the land.” Snowball’s eyes were saying that they are in great need of her to come.

   Minutes later Bella was on Snowballs back and riding to the magical place Snowball was talking about. When they got there all the horses and other wings, horns, or both. But they all looked sad.
“Why are they sad, Snowball?” asked Bella.
“They know that your father and mother are ill. They think that if they don’t have a leader to guide them that we will become extinct.”
Than all the horses saw Bella they cheered. Snowball took Bella to the castle. They flew into the room were Bella’s mother and father was.
“Bella? Is that you?” said Bella’s Mother.
“Yes it is mother it is me. I came to take over.” said Bella. I’m just not sure if I’m going to be ready, thought Bella.

Please wait in tell next contest to see if Bella will be ready.